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Timpuktu Member
Joined: 09 Aug 2004 Posts: 86 Location: Finland, Helsinki
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 9:27 am Post subject: Compo entry: Abadoned goldmine inside volcano |
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It has been long time since i posted to delgine forum but because old members are coming back alive, ive desided to give a try on this compo. I only hope that i can get at top three so i can ask jeroen to send me a copy of Deled Pro as an reward.
My idea for the entry was simple: cartoon-ish map settled at small island in middle of nowhere. Island would contain an volcano and a small house.
No time for the screenshots:
Map isnt finished yet but ill post updates when i get done some significant improments.
Comments & critique is welcome as always.
- Timpuktu _________________ Life is a waste of time, time is a waste of life. Get wasted all the time and you have the time of your life. |
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Daaark DeleD PRO user
Joined: 01 Sep 2004 Posts: 2696 Location: Ottawa, Canada
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 9:45 am Post subject: |
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I really like that. I think the leaves part of the tree could use a bit of work. The texture you use for the dirt and the cave reminds me a bit of that talking turd on south park. _________________
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Timpuktu Member
Joined: 09 Aug 2004 Posts: 86 Location: Finland, Helsinki
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 9:51 am Post subject: |
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Daaark wrote: |
The texture you use for the dirt and the cave reminds me a bit of that talking turd on south park. |
OMG a turd volcano.
i actually can see what you mean. hmm basically reason for textures are so simple is that im a bad texture artist.
Im still working on the scene and ill try to make that rock texture less turd alike. There is still alot todo so i havent spend much attention to textures yet.
thanks for the comments daaark, you have just might made this map even better.
- Timpuktu _________________ Life is a waste of time, time is a waste of life. Get wasted all the time and you have the time of your life. |
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Timpuktu Member
Joined: 09 Aug 2004 Posts: 86 Location: Finland, Helsinki
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Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 2:41 pm Post subject: |
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Made some updates to my map. Here is two new screenshots.
Im still tweaking those textures until time run's out or im happy enough with em.
- Timpuktu _________________ Life is a waste of time, time is a waste of life. Get wasted all the time and you have the time of your life. |
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Jeroen Site Admin
Joined: 07 Aug 2004 Posts: 5332 Location: The Netherlands
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Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 3:15 pm Post subject: |
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Maps like this really give me a happy feeling. Very good work there Timpuktu! _________________ Check out Figuro, our online 3D app! More powerful 3D tools for free. |
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Daaark DeleD PRO user
Joined: 01 Sep 2004 Posts: 2696 Location: Ottawa, Canada
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Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 8:34 pm Post subject: |
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I love that cave entrance sign. Like you're going in there to gamble. _________________
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trucker2000 DeleD PRO user
Joined: 11 May 2005 Posts: 1839 Location: Sacramento, California
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Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 9:01 pm Post subject: |
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Hey, this is really looking good. _________________ Some day I will grow up and be a real modeler.
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Timpuktu Member
Joined: 09 Aug 2004 Posts: 86 Location: Finland, Helsinki
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 11:05 am Post subject: |
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Thanks all for your kind comments. Im happy to see that atleast someone likes what i do.
I have made some new updates to my scene and desided to show you some new screenshots (best way to get some new replies or views atleast ).
All comments are welcome as always and ill post more screenshots when i have something worth of showing done.
*Edit* I forgot to say that the new small island is still missing an valet parking sign.
- Timpuktu _________________ Life is a waste of time, time is a waste of life. Get wasted all the time and you have the time of your life. |
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Starnick DeleD PRO user
Joined: 28 Jul 2007 Posts: 611
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 11:13 am Post subject: |
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reminds me a bit of the TF2 levels |
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Mr.Fletcher DeleD PRO user
Joined: 07 Aug 2004 Posts: 1772 Location: Germany
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 11:17 am Post subject: |
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Damn, if you guys keep posting at that speed, I'm gonna have to keep up.
I like what you did with the sky and sea. Just the fog doesn't fit there very well imo, maybe you should play around with the color a bit. Also, you could try making the fog a bit red or orange when you take a screenshot in the vulcano. _________________ Behold! The DeleD Wiki! Please help us expanding it
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Daaark DeleD PRO user
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 11:25 am Post subject: |
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Very creative. You're getting a high vote from me. _________________
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Timpuktu Member
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 2:52 pm Post subject: |
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Mr.Fletcher wrote: |
I like what you did with the sky and sea. Just the fog doesn't fit there very well imo, maybe you should play around with the color a bit. Also, you could try making the fog a bit red or orange when you take a screenshot in the vulcano. |
I changed the fog color and here is the result from inside volcano. Outside it dosnt work that good because it makes the sea too dark.
Here's there screenshot:
I also add some new props outside so here's screenshot of that too.
Thanks all for replies everyone.
- Timpuktu _________________ Life is a waste of time, time is a waste of life. Get wasted all the time and you have the time of your life. |
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Jeroen Site Admin
Joined: 07 Aug 2004 Posts: 5332 Location: The Netherlands
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 3:05 pm Post subject: |
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But.... what happens when you DO press the big red button??
Nice work! _________________ Check out Figuro, our online 3D app! More powerful 3D tools for free. |
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trucker2000 DeleD PRO user
Joined: 11 May 2005 Posts: 1839 Location: Sacramento, California
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 7:53 pm Post subject: |
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This just keeps getting better. _________________ Some day I will grow up and be a real modeler.
"Never give up! Never surrender!!"
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WhiteWing DeleD PRO user
Joined: 26 Sep 2007 Posts: 120 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 8:36 pm Post subject: |
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This is a really nice scene! Great work. |
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