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trucker2000 DeleD PRO user
Joined: 11 May 2005 Posts: 1839 Location: Sacramento, California
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Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 12:44 am Post subject: Truckers 08 christmas compo entry |
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This is still a wip, but is close enough to being done, I thought I'd show it.
I'm still trying to figure out why the trees look lit. _________________ Some day I will grow up and be a real modeler.
"Never give up! Never surrender!!"
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MeinenM DeleD PRO user
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Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 1:17 am Post subject: |
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wow pretty nice, my only critique is your fence is really really thick maybe making it a lil thinner |
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Daaark DeleD PRO user
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Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 3:43 am Post subject: |
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Check the material settings on the trees, you might have turned off lighting on them like you did on the green lights.
I like it a lot. But you need to work on overall scene scale, and proportions. _________________
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trucker2000 DeleD PRO user
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Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 4:10 am Post subject: |
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MeinenM wrote: |
wow pretty nice, my only critique is your fence is really really thick maybe making it a lil thinner |
Fixed. I knew about this one, but hadn't fixed it.
Daaark wrote: |
Check the material settings on the trees, you might have turned off lighting on them like |
Thanks. I'll have to relight to fix it, but that's ok. I need to add the stars to the top as well.
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you need to work on overall scene scale, and proportions. |
Yup. Still have a few things.
Thanks for the critiques. I may have a 3 day weekend to work on it. _________________ Some day I will grow up and be a real modeler.
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Mr.Fletcher DeleD PRO user
Joined: 07 Aug 2004 Posts: 1772 Location: Germany
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Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 9:28 am Post subject: |
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Looking very good, Trucker! You improved a lot _________________ Behold! The DeleD Wiki! Please help us expanding it
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[K]hajit Member
Joined: 14 Aug 2008 Posts: 209 Location: The Netherlands
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Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 2:50 pm Post subject: |
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try to make those candy sticks point towards the middle they all go to the right |
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trucker2000 DeleD PRO user
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Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 11:39 pm Post subject: |
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[K]hajit wrote: |
try to make those candy sticks point towards the middle they all go to the right |
haha, thanks. I hadn't noticed that. _________________ Some day I will grow up and be a real modeler.
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trucker2000 DeleD PRO user
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Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 3:13 am Post subject: |
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Ok, fixed the fence, house, deleted the 26 clones of 1 fence board, deleted the 2 sets of 26 extra clones of lights, added the carpet and tree toppers.
I added a tree inside, but you can't see it. Can't think of anything else to add. _________________ Some day I will grow up and be a real modeler.
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[K]hajit Member
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Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 9:49 am Post subject: |
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nice =D
you made the house larger and the trees look more 3D now
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Mr.Fletcher DeleD PRO user
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Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 11:37 am Post subject: |
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That's pretty, I like it _________________ Behold! The DeleD Wiki! Please help us expanding it
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[K]hajit Member
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Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 12:07 pm Post subject: |
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lol you sneaky boy ..
trying to impress jeroen and paul jan with a gift there xD |
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trucker2000 DeleD PRO user
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Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 4:06 pm Post subject: |
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Done.
Changed the tree toppers. (I didn't like the bulky things I put there)
Moved the inside tree so people could see it. Added presents under it.
Added bows to the outside presents.
Edit: Oops
Added snow to the trees.
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Daaark DeleD PRO user
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Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 4:34 pm Post subject: |
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What's up with the windows? They are tiny and at knee height.
No sense of scale at all.
But I like the scene otherwise. Very nice. _________________
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[K]hajit Member
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Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 4:41 pm Post subject: |
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LOL... dark is jelous he wants a present to xD |
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Daaark DeleD PRO user
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Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 4:48 pm Post subject: |
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[K]hajit wrote: |
LOL... dark is jelous he wants a present to xD |
No jealously here. I want to see trucker improve. _________________
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